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We Are All Like Matches:: by ~Yumifox13:iconYumifox13:



We are all like matches
We're nothing but a stick
  That life was struck into by
    Some one much bigger then
                         Ourselves.

At first, we are a strong flame
  But then we get weaker and we
    start to fade slowly, at the start
      Then we go quicker, and get
  Smaller and Smaller

Until we eventually burn out.

Then there is smoke
     Which is the memories people
                    have of us.

Eventually even that smoke starts to
fade, becoming more difficult to see
fading and fading into the night with
nothing but a stick left over to see.

Then our bodies, "the stick"
the "match" itself,
is thrown away, with the other
sticks, to be left by ourselfs
and eventually to be entirely

                              forgotten.
©2008-2009 ~Yumifox13
:iconyumifox13:

Author's Comments

I lost my dad 7/20/08

I've started to look at life differently

I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing.

when will I look at the world as 'beautiful' again?

(C) 2008, Jasmine Griggs. I have given no one permision to copy or use this for anything, especially if they are selling it.

Do not copy, or redistribute. Unless you want to disturb the dead.

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:iconscubachickim:
Wow, this is really good.

... I'm still here, if you want to talk about it.

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:iconinsanityboy:
This poem is really quite good. Don't give up on the world yet.
:iconyumifox13:
Oh, thanks! <3

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Will I ever see the world as "beautiful" again?
:iconyudsan:
This...is truly beautiful. Despite the fact that it has a slightly pessimistic undertone, it stays true to how the life cycle really is.

I also lost my father to a car accident when I started the eight grade. My heart is with you.

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:iconispeak216:
wow . . .that was a beautiful poem.. . . .
:iconyumifox13:
Thank you, very much.

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Will I ever see the world as "beautiful" again?

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